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Wailing winds rattle windowpanes, with sounds of moans and clanking chains. My whole world soon starts to shudder. And my heart begins to flutter as a dark, violent vortex, shakes my house to its foundation. Caught in my peripheral sight I see a twisting in the night, and debris swirling in the dark. As the tornado carves its mark; gazing into the face of death I grab my chest, struggling for breath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/2/2019 7:57:00 PM
Back with much deserved congrats, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/3/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2019 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Emile! Well done :)
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Date: 2/28/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Juli, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 10:43:00 PM
The pairing of that poem with that photograph literally raised my BP. ;)
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Date: 1/24/2019 5:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen, your comments are always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 11:14:00 AM
Awesome poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2019 11:22:00 AM
Thanks my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs