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Whirring winds rattle windowpanes with sounds of moans and clanking chains. When the whole world seems to shudder my heart jumps into a flutter. And a ghostly aberration shakes my beliefs to their foundation. Caught in my peripheral sight magnified by the lack of light. Shifting shadows shriek from the dark hearing the neighborhood dogs bark. And I gaze at the face of death grab my chest, and struggle for breath. (Rhyme) Jan. 23, 2019 Rhyme Battle XII Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Juli- Michelle

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Date: 3/2/2019 7:57:00 PM
Back with much deserved congrats, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/3/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2019 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Emile! Well done :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/28/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Juli, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 10:43:00 PM
The pairing of that poem with that photograph literally raised my BP. ;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/24/2019 5:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen, your comments are always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 11:14:00 AM
Awesome poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2019 11:22:00 AM
Thanks my friend, Emile.