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elements combine elements are periodical periodical books bore periodical tables tables made of symbols tables without plates plates are round plates which hold pi pi is a formula pi is a tool tool for a scientist tool for a fool fool who professes knowledge fool who makes rules rules are finite rules are broken broken like copper broken like hearts hearts full of mystery hearts full of blood bloods full of iron blood contains water water has hydrogen water brings oxygen oxygen seems plentiful oxygen burns burns in a rocket ship burns in our cells cells in a prison cells of terror terror feeds anger terror is uncontrollable uncontrollable energy uncontrollable results results used strategically results used to war war is a winnower war is indiscriminate indiscriminate fools indiscriminate thinkers thinkers who tinker thinkers who risk risk more than they own risk mixing atoms atoms are mindless atoms of Adam are rash rash as surface burn rash from radiation radiation burn

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Date: 1/21/2017 1:21:00 AM
thank you for your positive comment
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Date: 12/16/2016 7:44:00 PM
I need to try another poem like this Hugs Eve
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/16/2016 9:53:00 PM
Happy Holy Days Eve! I miss you! Light & Love
Date: 11/25/2016 2:48:00 AM
very good...I am inspired.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/26/2016 4:35:00 PM
It's a fun form TRY it!
Date: 1/11/2015 9:35:00 PM
SWEET WIN...LOVE IT...PD
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Date: 1/11/2015 5:52:00 AM
Wow!!! Loved every word. A master class in quick fire poetry.
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Date: 1/10/2015 3:40:00 PM
Well done Debbie. Congratulations on your win... Verlena
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Date: 1/9/2015 9:29:00 AM
Debbie, this is truly an amazing piece highlighting the Periodic Chart. It is also brilliant in its creativity, imagery, and flow. Excellent write that deserves to be a winner. Congratulations, my friend! Pandita.
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:03:00 PM
Way to go great winner. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:45:00 AM
Well done cool one, congrats on your placement xx
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Date: 1/7/2015 12:22:00 AM
U hv Charged the elements in this table wid ur powerful words Debbie! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 9:13:00 PM
Amazing, Debbie! What a powerful write! Congratulations on your win! I agree with the others on placement, however!! 7+Fav, Sandra
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Date: 1/6/2015 7:43:00 PM
Masterfully crafted Debbie! I too would have placed this one higher.
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:14:00 PM
You should have been higher on the list of winners, Deb. This is elementary, dear Watson!! Loved it !!!!!!!!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 1/6/2015 6:41:00 PM
Still.........very thoughtful......thought provoking, and worthy ~!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/6/2015 6:16:00 PM
It's too dark Carrie, but life isn't always baby kittens & cotton candy?
Date: 1/6/2015 5:14:00 PM
Very creative, would of loved to have seen this one higher but judging is subjective. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:13:00 PM
I love the blitz form you have used Debbie - one day i will have a go at this form myself - you have inspired me! Many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/6/2015 3:02:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win Debbie....huggs
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:33:00 PM
like a wreath kind of poetry well formed, Debbie.. congrats!
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:39:00 PM
Debbie, a rush it is from one to the other, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/6/2015 11:15:00 AM
Great intelligent blitz Debbie! A poem that flows at the speed of a chemical reaction! A top 7 rating for you....impressed and caught under your line of fire! Congrats on a much deserved win. // paul
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:28:00 PM
Wow !! A fast pace a skillfully penned Blitz.
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:37:00 PM
deb, you made excellent use of this blitz form with this kind of a challenge. awesome!!!
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:33:00 AM
Wow, you are getting into these blitzes, aren't you! In some ways it reminds me of a 50 line chained haiku. Excellent!
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Date: 1/1/2015 4:08:00 AM
wow ever so complex, yet like a magnet, one is drawn towards this over and over again, never quite had a poem so effectual before...love this Deb, happy new year...
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/1/2015 7:52:00 AM
yup pretty much describes it- also describes a chain reaction- also describes - man's search for knowledge- also describes Pandora's Box _SO YES the form FITS the topic and the more forms you know the more likely you will be to be able to CHOSE the best form for the topic!
Date: 12/31/2014 7:40:00 PM
Wow, I studied the form before reading yours. Wow fifty lines and all those rules. They shouldn't have named a blitz rather they should of called it a touchdown. If you take this long to blitz the quarterback you just know the other team is going to score a touchdown. Happy New Year Debbie Lots of Love Armand. (that is my real first name a opposed to my pen name.)
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Date: 12/31/2014 3:34:00 PM
I was always terrible in chemistry, but I had to favorite this one and give it a "7". It's just so well done.
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