Get Your Premium Membership

Perhaps

When I can see you in their eyes and not grieve, perhaps I shall heal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 1/2/2018 2:55:00 PM
Powerful one-liner. Want to keep this one nearby. A FAVE for me. Thanks and congrats, Tim.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2017 10:14:00 AM
Great verse, Tim, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2017 5:51:00 AM
Touching and deep ... Congratulations ...
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2017 7:58:00 AM
The healing process takes its due course, for some a never ending one. Congratulations, Tim; indeed a worthy winner! Regards and seasonal greetings to you and those close to your heart. // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2017 6:39:00 AM
I lovely poem Tim.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2017 9:45:00 PM
Glad seeing you on a winner list, Tim. It assures me you are doing fine out there!! Hope you had a wonderful Xmas and congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2017 2:29:00 PM
- Great written, everything needs time Tim - Much said a few words - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2017 2:21:00 PM
So true and sometimes that is never.. Congratulations on your placement in the Monoku 1 contest Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 11/5/2017 8:56:00 AM
Just wanted to say hi, dear Tim. Wondering how you are, whether you are doing better. Hoping and praying that you are healing well. Sending prayers and good thoughts your way... Nikko <3
Login to Reply
Date: 1/17/2017 3:53:00 PM
That's the poet I remember.. Rip the heart out in a single line... Well done my friend..
Login to Reply
Date: 11/28/2016 9:51:00 AM
Grief is such a powerful emotion. I felt this so deeply and truly understand, dear Tim. Love, Elaine
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2016 10:16:00 AM
tim, I can't even think what contest this was any more. But it is a really strong message in this one line. Congrats
Login to Reply
Date: 10/13/2016 11:40:00 AM
oh wow, sadly beautiful Tim...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2016 11:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2016 11:04:00 AM
congratulations for a great one liner Tim...
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2016 4:19:00 PM
beautifully written with the perfect title...
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2016 2:50:00 PM
So sad Tim. I can feel your love for her.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2016 2:07:00 PM
What Jan said. I happen to know that, like me, Jan can't take too many sad writes before our empathetic parts become saturated. You are my fourth and, perhaps, the most poetically delivered ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2016 11:43:00 AM
heartbreaking line Tim:-( hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2016 11:37:00 AM
- Heartbreaking grief, Tim - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply