Perhaps

P erched between choices, I linger in the gray,
E very whisper of possibility tugging both ways.
R isk sits heavy, yet comfort hums its quiet song,
H oping one path proves right, fearing both could be wrong.
A ll days I balance fear with longing, want with need,
P recious moments slipping while I hesitate to lead.
S tep forward at last — though trembles chase the will to proceed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 2:27 AM
- A lot to think about, Jay ... well written :) - hugs
Rodgers Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 8:02 AM
Hello Jay, The way you've captured that feeling of being stuck between two choices is so relatable and real. It's a powerful look at hesitation and hope. Great Acrostic! Blessings, Jay, Daniel
George Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 9:32 PM
Step forward without fear and with determination. A highly profound and thought provoking acrostic.
Leake Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Enjoyed this Acrostic Jay And you managed to rhyme it as well Well written Kevin
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