Perfume

Phew! ….her perfume as she passed, 
knocked the swift from the sky
and the monkey from the temple wall: 
beat fast my raggedy heart!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 20, 2015 at 8:08 AM
great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7
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