Performances In Life

Performances in life 

       Enjoyed life from various aspects
       Each performance I do respect
       and success came as expected.
                   Hard to specify which is greatest.

      While stood First as student in school
      Me turned so joyous cheerful.
      A girl realised success in full.
                      Thought that performance as the best.

     Struggled lot to overcome barriers
     in building my chosen career.
     Meet challenge each step changing gear.
                        Admired to own skill as asset.

      Span of work went wide and wider.
      Lecturer turned writer, author
      Editor, talker, stage performer.
                         Continued in educative set.

      Acted as advisor to friends
      and always helping hand to lend.
      My erect head never to bend.
                          In broad spectrum played my cassette.

     Family was priority
     on top of each activity.
     Lived a life of quality 
                            Off and on set or reset.

   “You are the light of my life, Mom”
   Desirable remark came from
  my daughter: I replied prompt
                       “You are my achievement GREATEST.”


05/24/22

     . First Place 
My Greatest Performance in life 

Contest by JCB Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Peck Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 3:41 PM
Anisha, Congratulations on your wonderful achievements! And, yes ~ probably the greatest, the admiration of your daughter. :) Congratulations on your win!
Alex Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 6:24 AM
A great performance and achievement. Light and life. Congratulations!
Cook Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 1:41 AM
I was looking for some examples of tail rhyme. I came across yours and it is beautiful. You conveyed so much but ultimately you ended with the most important achievement.
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 8:40 AM
It sounds like you achieved so much, and in so many areas of your life. Kudos to you, dear poet!
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