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Motion's mementoes -- babe's tiny fingers uncurl centenarian's eyebrow raised the sun darting behind clouds an earthworm's tortuous wiggling performers all, a broad panorama -- seeking approval glimpses of meaning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/4/2021 7:44:00 AM
This appealed to my poetic side in every way.
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Date: 5/3/2021 2:36:00 PM
Every precious moment is held so close to the heart. Your words caress gently around me. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. I am softly smiling. :) Brandy
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Date: 5/3/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet comment, Brandy. Pillows and Feathers, Gershon
Date: 5/3/2021 7:40:00 AM
Those precious daily moments that catch our eye that we often take for granted. Tom
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Date: 5/3/2021 5:45:00 PM
'New experiences' can often be what we've always overlooked before. Thanks for the insight, Tom. Happiness, Gershon
Date: 5/3/2021 4:30:00 AM
Ooh...you have some cool imagery here. To see the simple things that touch our hearts in a big way. I rewatched a video from last May of my grandson scootering down my street (he was five). He was chasing a butterfly. At the end he turns around “Aww...it flied away.”
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/3/2021 5:44:00 PM
Thanks for sharing that story of your grandson chasing the butterfly. "It flied away," -- so adorable. I'm glad you maked a comment, Kim. lol

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