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Perfidious Wooer

As the sand washed shore By crystalline ocean waves Are the memories Unfounding many deceits Perfidious hope to heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/6/2017 11:19:00 AM
Great work, really inspiring and incredible.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2017 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Funom.
Date: 2/24/2017 4:57:00 PM
Has his slate washed clean? I hope so.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2017 12:35:00 PM
Yes Jean.
Date: 2/23/2017 7:53:00 AM
I'm sure the ocean has that effect on many people, Mrs Nayda.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2017 12:35:00 PM
Indeed Daniel.
Date: 2/23/2017 6:39:00 AM
This is beautifully written Nayda, though it feels a bit sad. It feels lonely to me. Nicely expressed
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/23/2017 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Chris.

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