Perfidious Wooer

As the sand washed shore
By crystalline ocean waves
Are the memories 
Unfounding many deceits
Perfidious hope to heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Makama Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Great work, really inspiring and incredible.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Thank you Funom.
Murray Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:57 PM
Has his slate washed clean? I hope so.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Yes Jean.
Turner Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:53 AM
I'm sure the ocean has that effect on many people, Mrs Nayda.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Indeed Daniel.
Green Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 6:39 AM
This is beautifully written Nayda, though it feels a bit sad. It feels lonely to me. Nicely expressed
Negron Flores Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Chris.
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