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Perfectly Still

This poem was inspired by the Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Poets, Ten Days
challengeby Debbie Guzzi.

Painting #2
Portrait of Carol Nye Rhoades (Robinson)-Katharine Nash Rhoades 1915


Perfectly Still 

Perfectly still, my mind races ahead leaping flowerbeds of perfect roses. 
Apple trees with the sweetest apples await. I pluck them from their branches. 
Birthday balloons tied to the porch swing, restrained wave to me
hurry set us free—to fly—to climb the sky 
Perfectly still, my mind races ahead of me 
leaping.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Great write ...I like your perspective of the painting...
Barney Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Thanks again. :D
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