Peter Rees Poet Rhyme

Perfectly Formed

Perfectly formed in a challenging terrain,
low and squat they lie and ever-ready
to shrug off Hebridean wind and rain
with weathered roofs and walls rock-steady.
In days of yore, a refuge from the storm,
now picturesque, and just a bit forlorn.

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Quoth Theraven January 31, 2021 at 5:16 PM Peter, 'and just a bit forlorn.' Oh the tales they'd tell if they could talk. -Richard Peter Rees February 14, 2021 at 4:38 AM Thank you my friend. And thank you for reading between the lines.

Richard Evans September 27, 2020 at 11:01 AM I dig the rhythm of this piece. It's almost musical but then we all know song lyrics and poetry are not the same thing unless you're Bob Dylan. Thanks for sharing.................peace! Peter Rees February 14, 2021 at 4:39 AM Thanks Ricky. I enjoyed your comment.