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Perfectly Broken

I seek no remorse the damage has set in the ache is in my heart as the argument continues Why does it hurt so much? one person can have so much intensive control high on the power of destroying a person so worthy Does it help you sleep at night? one sided conversations competing with hate deep breaths as my chest begins to cave Does any of this phase you? my lips are trembling please one more taste eyes are closed and my body is patiently waiting When will you decide this is enough? a tear slowly falls down my pale freckled skin with no response as my lips still wait Are you having fun yet? my whole existence is crumbling piece by piece this is your creation and you are the one to blame I am broken. I am lost. Was this always your plan?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/20/2024 3:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/9/2016 12:36:00 AM
deep write.. Nicole.. LINDA
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Date: 12/28/2014 5:07:00 PM
Such a heartfelt write - very powerfully penned with intense imagery Nicole :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/28/2014 8:02:00 AM
Heartfelt write on betrayal. Nicole
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:57:00 AM
A powerful piece of prose, Nicole! :) john.
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