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uncooked egg

Perfectly boiled egg

the shell softly cracks to spoon letting steam twirl up yellow yolk gleams like sunrise firm fluid just gelled- yet when whites still weep its yucky gunk
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Miller Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 2:28 AM
LOL, congratulations
Anderson Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 11:21 AM
thanks very much. Cheers!
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Ha. I am glad you dissed it at the end. Yucky gunk indeed
Anderson Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:02 PM
Yeah it's yuck
Kitchin Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 5:18 AM
John, congratulations on your first place win. Eggs can be delightful if cooked right or yucky if under cooked. Well done.
Anderson Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 11:39 AM
Thanks very much for your feedback. Cheers and Best Wishes to you.
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