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Perfection Plus

In my perfect world animals and human beings frolic in sweet peace. No inhumane things inflicted on God's creatures only joy they bring. No color line crossed hate crimes to other races shades of their faces. no child be abused parents love would nuture so little ones to grow. Church of choice would be free to enter, kneel and pray no gun fire play. Hungry mouths would eat thirsty souls would be complete smiles shine all the time. friends forever flowed hearts glowed, no bombs dropped or hurled in my perfect world. For Ms. Brown's Contest

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Date: 10/25/2013 1:09:00 PM
each one is beautiful and deep....PD
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Date: 5/22/2010 1:07:00 PM
If only this was a perfect world, we don't do enough to try to achieve this. When i viewed the title "Perfection Plus" i thought you wrote a Haiku about me, hehe. Good luck in Carol's contest >> James
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:06:00 PM
soon to be a reality! Isaiah 11:6-9 and Isaiah 65:21-24
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Date: 5/22/2010 8:14:00 AM
This would be an awesome description of my perfect world as well, Satin Doll. Soup mail in a moment. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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