Perfection Plus

In my perfect world
animals and human beings
frolic in sweet peace.

No inhumane things
inflicted on God's creatures
only joy they bring.

No color line crossed
hate crimes to other races
shades of their faces.

no child be abused
parents love would nuture so
little ones to grow.

Church of choice would be
free to enter, kneel and pray
no gun fire play.

Hungry mouths would eat
thirsty souls would be complete
smiles shine all the time.

friends forever flowed
hearts glowed, no bombs dropped or hurled
in my perfect world.



For Ms. Brown's Contest
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October 25, 2013 at 1:09 PM
each one is beautiful and deep....PD
Fraser Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 1:07 PM
If only this was a perfect world, we don't do enough to try to achieve this. When i viewed the title "Perfection Plus" i thought you wrote a Haiku about me, hehe. Good luck in Carol's contest >> James
Palli Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 12:06 PM
soon to be a reality! Isaiah 11:6-9 and Isaiah 65:21-24
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 8:14 AM
This would be an awesome description of my perfect world as well, Satin Doll. Soup mail in a moment. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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