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Perfection I Is

Take a good look I'm definitely no hunk To some though, my happiness is my ***** A positive type dude Negatives tabooed Perfection I is but at times my *****'s junk

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Silent One

Date: 11/9/2017 9:23:00 AM

Yes, but in a suit!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2017 9:32:00 AM

Can't really tell...too small! Are you auditioning for a part on TV!!! YEE HAW!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/9/2017 9:16:00 AM

You are silly to perfection//I wish it was an infection//that'd spread//like a cold in the head//in a round-the-worldly direction. SPUNK ON JUNKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2017 9:37:00 AM

Gotta keep trying!!! It's in my job description!!! HOPE YOUR DAY IS BRIGHT AND SHINY!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/9/2017 9:08:00 AM

Giggles... Naughty indeed! ;) Good morning Jack! xomo <3

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2017 9:34:00 AM

That's just who I am... the world needs giggles right now!!! Good morning Mo Mo!!! xxx

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2017 8:29:00 AM

Lol...Naughty man

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2017 8:34:00 AM

You told me that yesterday!!! A NEW mysterious image???

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2017 6:30:00 AM

We all have days like that, where your life doesn't go as planned and no matter what you do, as with your spunk, nothing seems to work! It's only natural to feel that way, but remember your spunk is the funk that drives us to funny land! Where all the trees are pink and lemonade is free! Great Work my friend!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2017 6:40:00 AM

Love your description of funny land! May I use it??? lol HAVE A PINK LEMONADE KIND OF DAY MY FRIEND!!!