Perfection

Perfection!

The eyes, evenly spaced, one eye and another, one to a side
The eyes warn of the precipice, find the water, search for prey
The ears hear the risk not seen, one ear and another, one to a side
The ears discern a threat, sense the danger, and caution ‘step away’

All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man

The nose, centered, beneath the eyes, nature’s blessing
The nose, a wafting of flowers, a babe’s sweetness, an aroma of spices pure
The mouth, nature bestows its riches, apples, cherries, water ice cold streaming
The mouth, a spoon to nurture, of tasteful pleasures, and we endure

All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man

The arms, to heft the bounty, sinew to raise all that is of essence
The arms, to protect loved ones, to embrace, to till the soil
The hands, to build, to feed, to fold in deference to a greater presence	
The hands, to calm, to stay the evening chill, to celebrate the harvest of toil

All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man		

The legs, to lessen the distance between mother and child, to walk, to run
The legs, to ascend the mountain, to follow the trail, to seek the new and leave the known
The feet, to seize the earth, to stride, and in turn, to lower gently, earthward, a victory won
The feet, to stand, to steady, to lean, to tactfully depart once seeds are sown 

All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man

The mind of man, to conceive, to invent, to ease the burden, to assuage the pain
The mind of man, to conserve the forests, to defend the jungles, to cleanse the water
The Spirit and Soul of man, enduring, unceasing, continuing beyond our earthly plane
The Spirit and Soul of man, to love and revere Nature as mother, as father

All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Joshua Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 3:15 PM
A Lovely poem. Well written!. Kudos poet!
Leong Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 6:16 AM
wow! well written, i actually visualised each body part, good words that rhymed too. i enjoyed reading it; cheers!
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 4:42 AM
Hi Gary. I really enjoyed your piece. Congrats for having your poem featured in the PoetrySoup homepage!! ;-)
Zimmer Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Hello Teddy--thank you for taking the time to read 'Perfection!' Thank you for the kind words....I read 'Jester' and came away feeling really good...I'm glad he lived! Precarious work....that Jester business....
Darnell Sr Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Very well written, it was a pleasurable read. Fantastic...
Zimmer Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 1:30 AM
I read 3 or 4 of your poems! As explained below, I am not much of a poet. You are! Perfection! seems superficial. Your work has depth of feeling, passion. This line 'Rest in peace my loving parents, I'll see you on the other side' is reminiscent of what caused me to write 'Perfection!' There are so many divergent opinions regarding the afterlife. All considered, the human body and its spirit just seem too perfect to be accidental and that is the message of my poem. We are all too perfect to have been accidental. Enjoyed your work!
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 1:25 PM
- New to Poetry Soup ... Welcome and thanks for your first very well written poem, Gary :) - // Sun :)
Zimmer Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thank you, Sunshine Smile! You are the prolific one! Read 'Eagle' ...inspiring, spiritual, moving! I am not a poet though I'm good at pretense...true crime and short stories are my thing...though my tribute to Ray Carver rings a kind of poetry bell. Thanks again! Look forward to reading more of your work...and that of others!
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