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Perfection

Perfection! The eyes, evenly spaced, one eye and another, one to a side The eyes warn of the precipice, find the water, search for prey The ears hear the risk not seen, one ear and another, one to a side The ears discern a threat, sense the danger, and caution ‘step away’ All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man The nose, centered, beneath the eyes, nature’s blessing The nose, a wafting of flowers, a babe’s sweetness, an aroma of spices pure The mouth, nature bestows its riches, apples, cherries, water ice cold streaming The mouth, a spoon to nurture, of tasteful pleasures, and we endure All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man The arms, to heft the bounty, sinew to raise all that is of essence The arms, to protect loved ones, to embrace, to till the soil The hands, to build, to feed, to fold in deference to a greater presence The hands, to calm, to stay the evening chill, to celebrate the harvest of toil All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man The legs, to lessen the distance between mother and child, to walk, to run The legs, to ascend the mountain, to follow the trail, to seek the new and leave the known The feet, to seize the earth, to stride, and in turn, to lower gently, earthward, a victory won The feet, to stand, to steady, to lean, to tactfully depart once seeds are sown All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man The mind of man, to conceive, to invent, to ease the burden, to assuage the pain The mind of man, to conserve the forests, to defend the jungles, to cleanse the water The Spirit and Soul of man, enduring, unceasing, continuing beyond our earthly plane The Spirit and Soul of man, to love and revere Nature as mother, as father All to hint of a plan, that of the perfection of man

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Date: 9/9/2017 3:15:00 PM
A Lovely poem. Well written!. Kudos poet!
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Date: 9/9/2017 6:16:00 AM
wow! well written, i actually visualised each body part, good words that rhymed too. i enjoyed reading it; cheers!
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Date: 9/9/2017 4:42:00 AM
Hi Gary. I really enjoyed your piece. Congrats for having your poem featured in the PoetrySoup homepage!! ;-)
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Gary Zimmer
Date: 9/9/2017 1:12:00 PM
Hello Teddy--thank you for taking the time to read 'Perfection!' Thank you for the kind words....I read 'Jester' and came away feeling really good...I'm glad he lived! Precarious work....that Jester business....
Date: 9/8/2017 11:25:00 PM
Very well written, it was a pleasurable read. Fantastic...
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Gary Zimmer
Date: 9/9/2017 1:30:00 AM
I read 3 or 4 of your poems! As explained below, I am not much of a poet. You are! Perfection! seems superficial. Your work has depth of feeling, passion. This line 'Rest in peace my loving parents, I'll see you on the other side' is reminiscent of what caused me to write 'Perfection!' There are so many divergent opinions regarding the afterlife. All considered, the human body and its spirit just seem too perfect to be accidental and that is the message of my poem. We are all too perfect to have been accidental. Enjoyed your work!
Date: 6/7/2017 1:25:00 PM
- New to Poetry Soup ... Welcome and thanks for your first very well written poem, Gary :) - // Sun :)
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Gary Zimmer
Date: 6/7/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine Smile! You are the prolific one! Read 'Eagle' ...inspiring, spiritual, moving! I am not a poet though I'm good at pretense...true crime and short stories are my thing...though my tribute to Ray Carver rings a kind of poetry bell. Thanks again! Look forward to reading more of your work...and that of others!

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