Perfection

PERFECTION Peaceful, quiet scene, Surrounded by God's beauty. Nature at it's best. For Power In Observation Contest by John Freeman

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2011 1:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..The sparrow that fell was still just with downy feathers..It fell onto concrete so I am sure that it had no chance at survival..Thanks for the review...Sara

Judy Ball
Date: 8/11/2011 1:59:00 PM

Thanks so much Sara. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/23/2011 8:17:00 PM

Such a peaceful verse to counter this awful heat with no rain. Reading poetry is the best alternative Judy. - a lovely verse!

Judy Ball
Date: 8/11/2011 2:02:00 PM

Thanks Elizabeth. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 7:48:00 PM

Congrats Judy my friend on a wonderful win for a perfect poem ..enjoy luv.. power..

Judy Ball
Date: 8/11/2011 2:12:00 PM

Thanks so much Linda. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

Date: 7/23/2011 2:44:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )

Judy Ball
Date: 8/11/2011 2:12:00 PM

Thanks so much Jack. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/23/2011 2:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Judy! Annalise

Judy Ball
Date: 8/11/2011 2:15:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

David Williams

Date: 7/22/2011 11:19:00 AM

congrats on second place, David

Judy Ball
Date: 8/11/2011 2:18:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God |bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/22/2011 10:31:00 AM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, Judy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2011 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in John Moses Freeman's contest "Power Of Observation" Judy. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2011 8:16:00 AM

Judy, Also with graces provided, you did well in gracing the sponsor. Congratulations on your second place! Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/20/2011 8:37:00 PM

Good luck in the contest,, nature and her best.. enjoyed your awesome haiku~poem,, have yourself a blessed day,..p.d.

Judy Ball
Date: 7/20/2011 9:30:00 PM

Thaqnk you so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/19/2011 11:00:00 AM

Awesome piece on nature's perfection Judy ;) blessings Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 7/17/2011 3:09:00 AM

Very nice Haiku here Judy.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

James Fraser

Date: 7/16/2011 7:12:00 PM

Och, I thought this Haiku was about me, he jokes. I so love nature, she's quite a girl. Good luck in John's contest Judy :) smiles 4U

Judy Ball
Date: 7/16/2011 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much John for stopping by and for such kind words..\God Bless, JB

James Fraser

Date: 7/16/2011 7:12:00 PM

Och, I thought this Haiku was about me, he jokes. I so love nature, she's quite a girl. Good luck in John's contest Judy :) smiles 4U

Judy Ball
Date: 7/16/2011 7:30:00 PM

Thank you so much John. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/16/2011 6:05:00 PM

Feeling your feeling by enjoying in reading. Nice, God bless you.bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2011 3:15:00 PM

Lovely haiku. It must be for the contest?!

Judy Ball
Date: 7/16/2011 4:18:00 PM

You/re right it is. SorryI forgot to lable it. I'll do that. Thanks so much for stopping by. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/16/2011 1:58:00 PM

Thoughtful reading of the picture, good luck if it is for the contest, Judy

Judy Ball
Date: 7/16/2011 4:19:00 PM

Sorry about that. It is for the contest. I forgot to lable it. I'll fix that right away. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

Date: 7/16/2011 1:08:00 PM

Yes, indeed, Judy - reading this gem has probably lowered my BP!

Judy Ball
Date: 7/16/2011 1:42:00 PM

Glad you liked it my friend. Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments. You are most appreciated. God Bless, JB