Perfection

PERFECTION


Peaceful, quiet scene,
Surrounded by God's beauty.
Nature at it's best.




For Power In Observation Contest by John Freeman

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Sara Kendrick

August 11, 2011 at 1:38 PM

Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..The sparrow that fell was still just with downy feathers..It fell onto concrete so I am sure that it had no chance at survival..Thanks for the review...Sara

Judy Ball

August 11, 2011 at 1:59 PM

Thanks so much Sara. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Elizabeth Wesley

July 23, 2011 at 8:17 PM

Such a peaceful verse to counter this awful heat with no rain. Reading poetry is the best alternative Judy. - a lovely verse!

Judy Ball

August 11, 2011 at 2:02 PM

Thanks Elizabeth. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 23, 2011 at 7:48 PM

Congrats Judy my friend on a wonderful win for a perfect poem ..enjoy luv.. power..

Judy Ball

August 11, 2011 at 2:12 PM

Thanks so much Linda. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

July 23, 2011 at 2:44 PM

I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )

Judy Ball

August 11, 2011 at 2:12 PM

Thanks so much Jack. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Audrey Haick

July 23, 2011 at 2:22 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Judy! Annalise

Judy Ball

August 11, 2011 at 2:15 PM

Thanks so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

David Williams

July 22, 2011 at 11:19 AM

congrats on second place, David

Judy Ball

August 11, 2011 at 2:18 PM

Thanks so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God |bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 22, 2011 at 10:31 AM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, Judy

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 22, 2011 at 10:26 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in John Moses Freeman's contest "Power Of Observation" Judy. Love, Carol

John Freeman

July 22, 2011 at 8:16 AM

Judy, Also with graces provided, you did well in gracing the sponsor. Congratulations on your second place! Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A

July 20, 2011 at 8:37 PM

Good luck in the contest,, nature and her best.. enjoyed your awesome haiku~poem,, have yourself a blessed day,..p.d.

Judy Ball

July 20, 2011 at 9:30 PM

Thaqnk you so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Wilma Neels

July 19, 2011 at 11:00 AM

Awesome piece on nature's perfection Judy ;) blessings Wilma

Kash Poet

July 17, 2011 at 3:09 AM

Very nice Haiku here Judy.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

James Fraser

July 16, 2011 at 7:12 PM

Och, I thought this Haiku was about me, he jokes. I so love nature, she's quite a girl. Good luck in John's contest Judy :) smiles 4U

Judy Ball

July 16, 2011 at 7:30 PM

Thank you so much John. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

James Fraser

July 16, 2011 at 7:12 PM

Och, I thought this Haiku was about me, he jokes. I so love nature, she's quite a girl. Good luck in John's contest Judy :) smiles 4U

Judy Ball

July 16, 2011 at 7:29 PM

Thank you so much John for stopping by and for such kind words..\God Bless, JB

Bl Devnath

July 16, 2011 at 6:05 PM

Feeling your feeling by enjoying in reading. Nice, God bless you.bl

Andrea Dietrich

July 16, 2011 at 3:15 PM

Lovely haiku. It must be for the contest?!

Judy Ball

July 16, 2011 at 4:18 PM

You/re right it is. SorryI forgot to lable it. I'll do that. Thanks so much for stopping by. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 16, 2011 at 1:58 PM

Thoughtful reading of the picture, good luck if it is for the contest, Judy

Judy Ball

July 16, 2011 at 4:19 PM

Sorry about that. It is for the contest. I forgot to lable it. I'll fix that right away. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

July 16, 2011 at 1:08 PM

Yes, indeed, Judy - reading this gem has probably lowered my BP!

Judy Ball

July 16, 2011 at 1:42 PM

Glad you liked it my friend. Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments. You are most appreciated. God Bless, JB

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