Perfection

A loving thought
slips outside
a perfect vision
it cannot hide

Those piercing eyes,
your happy smile
a perfect vision
to dream a while

A dream of you
and all I see
a perfect vision
of love eternity

Your silent dignity
its inner light
a perfect vision
illuminates my sight

A burning hope
please hear it true
a perfect vision
that’s meant for you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Segal Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 2:20 PM
i LIKE YOUR POETRY, WELL WRITTEN
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 5:18 AM
Nicely writtten thoughts put to pen I especially like lines one and two. Keep writing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 3:47 AM
Beautiful rhyme Gareth, it flowed superbly>>James
Brown Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 11:46 AM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Gareth. Thank you for sharing.Thank you for your kind comments. Welcome home. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 1:41 PM
I really like the flow of the poem, good job
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