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Perfection

when I look at a bird in a tree the first thing I notice is its colours are within the lines

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/19/2023 5:50:00 AM

I'm intrigued by this one, blurring reality...

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/19/2023 6:02:00 AM

Quite! Nature is never sloppy or rushed and then there is that blur of reality as you so well put it, just to keep you on your toes, thanks for your continued support

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/9/2023 2:43:00 AM

It is a great observation and a short and sweet poem.

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/9/2023 2:59:00 AM

well thank you very much

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/8/2023 3:07:00 PM

that's an interesting thought. Never thought about the bird's colors are within the lines. A nice read.

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/8/2023 3:35:00 PM

Thank you Sara, your comment is appreciated.