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Chocolate would be calorific free Politician promises would be kept, regardless of the cost or what they meant Doctors get triple wages and nurses twice as much Wars are settled playing tidily winks and religion that is banned for good The work week starts on Monday and finishes that night and all woman come with instruction books ! just to help me out. Snow only comes on Xmas day and puppy's never grow up and Britain moved next to the Bahamas in the Caribbean sea 17022013 comp entry

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Date: 2/17/2016 9:30:00 PM
This was delightful. I love the lighthearted humor through out (especially the instruction book line --- awesome!) ... there's a lot of great entries into this contest, so I'll be curious to see the results. I just like seeing everyone's different take on it.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/18/2016 2:45:00 AM
life in my hands with that line lol

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