Perfect World

In a Perfect World
To the Poor disperse Wealth
The sickly unabated Health
And to you i Decree
A commandment of Love 
Written in Blood
To love that which is Nearest
Your heart holds most dearest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Palli Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Well done! The perfect world will be here when Jesus rules. Susan
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Nicely done on what would help make the world a better place. Keep writing. Sara
Owens Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Very Good...Marty
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