Perfect Winter Night

This is a perfect winter night to tandem thyself with my sizzling nerves 
Candle light stuns thy hips moving in wine-red skirt, penning killer curves
O’ watch our bed rose’s flame in moonlight, instating a scene of heaven 
Bewitch all my hormones with your fervent lips, sipping glimpses of Champaign

Not the dressing but only the undressing would unveil the unanimous pleasure 
Writing a simile is impossible to explicate the true sense of rubbing thou bare 
Gripping my hands to thy hips, pinning thy legs, should it get thee so helpless?
Slow like a tide while I move in thee, thou woo me with thy yearning murmurs

Wine in your eyes sets the blaze in my rise, what else on earth is wise than this libido
Dun no why, while I race my insane moves unto thy pulses, thou ever gave a “Go”!
Cruising my fingers down across thy necklace, should it get thee so restless?
Like a roll of wheels, I keep banging with no pauses hoping something clueless

Is this a mission of flooding bliss unto the myriad nerves, in an act of gleeful fission?
I fall on thou with a feel of ousting a “Niagara”; thou hugged me with none between
O’ what a wonder, I am alive though, after halting my heart & glancing the heaven
Beheld I am mesmerized between your pleasing eyes sinking in the ocean of ******
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Well...if this was a winter night...no blankets were needed by the sound of the temps in this poem !!!!! Congrats on your win here !!!! james
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March 4, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congrats... your poem is good....and the best part- its beautiful.keep writing my dear friend.wishing you all the best and hoping for more doses of such inspiring poetry.
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem. Post some more. Ernilando
Palli Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 8:17 AM
Can feel the passion
Brown Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in the October 2009 PoetrySoup International Poetry Site Contest Chandru. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals . I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 8:54 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
Fraser Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 10:08 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
Fisher Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:56 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
Nutter Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 3:01 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 4:35 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Chandru. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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December 7, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
Burton Avatar
August 23, 2009 at 10:23 PM
beautiful poetry.... loved the topics and enjoy your night:):)
Goff Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 5:45 PM
joyful, loving, wonderful! jmg
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April 8, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Well, your feeings of passion are clearly portrayed here. In that respect, your poem is well written. However, this dude as you called me is a dudette. It is a common mistake, I even got drafted way back when. Thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry.
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April 2, 2009 at 7:19 AM
this form was very soothing too to this lovely writing! ~ Arany
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