Russell Sivey Poet Terza Rima

Perfect Water Lair

The air is wet, the sky is very grey
A buoy works its shift down near the shore
Light is quite scarce in these clouds by the bay

Might be a little rain, clouds to implore
The waves are more brisk down on the surface
There might be a flash of lightning no more

There’s nothing between the water and grace
A constant wind exists out in the air
There’s a tender, calm feeling in this place

Never will one find terror or despair
On this ocean a perfect water lair

Russell Sivey

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Lucilla Carrillo January 10, 2013 at 11:31 AM This is good. It sounds like the perfect place to be. Thanks for sharing, also for going through all three of my poems and for calling me a friend. God bless you always. Lucilla

Toquyen Harrell January 10, 2013 at 9:20 AM I can feel the peacefulness of it. Awesome job, Russell:).

Carrie Richards January 10, 2013 at 9:08 AM Peaceful and serene....a lovely poem, Russell. And thank you kindly for my placement in your doditso contest....I am honored!

Len Gasun January 10, 2013 at 5:25 AM This is extremely a fascinating write my dear friend, Russell! I love it so much and so with the lovely form. Thank you so much for sharing, for my awesome win in your latest contest (it's my great honor and pleasure) and all your supports in my poems, contests and everything! More graces and love to you always! love and hugs, Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 9, 2013 at 9:14 PM great stuff Russell and thanks for my wife's first place win. she is so happy and Positano is as beautiful as she wrote it. she is not out of the woods yet but may be released this weekend from hospital if she passes her nutrition tests. she misses you and everyone. Ron

Debra Squyres January 9, 2013 at 8:35 PM We are recieving a lot of rain right now...grey clouds, thunder, lake in the yard is my lair lol Enjoyed your poem !!

Rollo West January 9, 2013 at 8:17 PM Hello my friend, really enjoyed this write about the ocean, very descriptive. Rollo

Lori Lucas Mcclure January 9, 2013 at 6:17 PM Awesome write!! ---Lori