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'perfect Timing'

The fleeting moments was probably in preparation for today where you have been a constant thread mixing with the chaos to bring the calm I never thought I would need - in your own style digging for the things that made me unhappy unravel the thoughts I was too afraid to actually give a voice to though I knew it would be the only way to work through the fear and confusion in the background that little encouragement I needed was like a silent pat on the back to get back up and try again though my vision seem to have been displaced in all the madness and laughter it made me realise that perfect timing does not have a human certification attached to it, it is exactly that perfect timing
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/27/2012 1:33:00 PM
Wow Wilma..) A real truly soulfilling write just had to return to this one ; (going great girl) yours Joe
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Date: 11/7/2012 12:24:00 PM
Such a reflective write and one I truly enjoyed...Imaging u just standing there during this solitary moment and all these powerful tho'ts floating thru your mind...very lovely poetry as always! Luv, gwendolen
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:22:00 PM
Good thoughts to read Wilma, and thanks for the great comment.."
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Date: 10/11/2012 9:17:00 AM
Only God has perfect timing. Anybody else would probably be invading your privacy.
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Date: 10/10/2012 10:27:00 AM
beautiful write indeed, Wilma. Hope your week is a great one, lfde : )
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Date: 10/9/2012 3:33:00 PM
Gosh! I love the way you write! :o) It's like you are telling a story,and finishing it off with a lesson that has been learned.A lesson that the rest of the world needs to learn. It's beautiful! <3 (o:
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Date: 10/9/2012 11:34:00 AM
Absolutely, exquisite write, Wilma.. I am especially happy I did not miss this..It is destined for my favorites list! Love it! Love, Annalise
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Date: 10/9/2012 9:33:00 AM
your title and my reading this awesome poem, is just that..............
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Date: 10/9/2012 9:14:00 AM
you fulfill the element of tenderness, wilms... i go wow!.. enjoyed!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:11:00 AM
Oh, this is a very beautiful write, Wilma. I have enjoyed reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing and have a nice day always!!! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:40:00 PM
This is a fantastic, a simply fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed this incredibly wondrous poem! You have pieced together an overwhelmingly perfect timing of a write! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/8/2012 7:17:00 AM
Lovely emotive write here Wilma.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 10/8/2012 6:07:00 AM
Deep write my dear CTH... Wonderful words from a heart surrounded by beauty and love....Cape Town Honey. CPT... also stands for "Cabbies Tearing Havoc" lol just saying... oxoxoox Michael
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Date: 10/8/2012 5:57:00 AM
Oh, Wilma ..... yes! Your poem are perfectly too :) - Have a wonderful and happy new week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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