Perfect Storm

an imperfect storm
does less harm
than a perfect one
a predilection
for perfection
and I am undone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Tor Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 8:18 AM
This is a great play on words David and clever too. Really enjoyed and I am favoring it...
Crandall Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 8:52 PM
Thanks for the compliment, Michael - glad you liked it!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 3:25 PM
Nice twisting of words…like a candy cane..well its Christmas!
Crandall Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 8:51 PM
Thanks Kim :-)
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