Kash Poet Poet Verse

Perfect Rain Dance---Lento Poetry

Cold rain drops on your face
boldly touch your lips with bliss 
hold my hand, let's do a rain dance
old memories ignite our first kiss.

Get closer to my mouth dear
Let our breaths mingle once
Set the stage for a perfect kiss
Bet this is our best rain dance.






By:kash poet(28th July 2011)
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Nette Onclaud April 13, 2012 at 11:19 PM oh yeah!... congrats on your grand win, kashi, and more cheers to you for all the recent placements.. having TPS technical problems, awwwh!..:) huggs

Olusegun Arowolo April 13, 2012 at 6:28 PM Awesome and beautiful write,Kash...A perfect rain dance indeed...Congratulations on your well deserved win....This is classic....

Deborah Burch April 13, 2012 at 5:40 PM Kash!! Congratulations on your win!! Sultry!! Well Done big hug--deb ;)

Gwendolen Song April 13, 2012 at 4:55 PM Smashingly done! One hot number here, Kash! Congrats on a smooth write! :) Gwendolen

Carrie Richards April 13, 2012 at 1:57 PM A delight!! Congratulations, to you Kash!! You are on a roll, and well deserved recognition!!

Carol Eastman April 13, 2012 at 8:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Interesting read.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 13, 2012 at 5:52 AM Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest P.D. sponsored "Any poem goes~" Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2012 at 9:54 PM Kash, a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD

Elizabeth Wesley August 12, 2011 at 8:30 PM I love being out in the rain and your verse describes the feeling so well..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 2, 2011 at 4:16 PM Very romantic, Kash and you sure pulled off this form so well :) Enjoyed reading this!

Wilma Neels July 29, 2011 at 3:47 PM This is a great entry for the contest Kash!! Good luck to you ;-)

Jack Horne July 29, 2011 at 12:58 PM You made this look so easy, Kash - I can't write anything in this form so far!

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2011 at 10:16 AM wow, Kash, I would say you really did a good job with this form. Perfect rhyming so I would be very surprised not to see it on the list. YOu made it look efforless, my friend!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 29, 2011 at 7:42 AM good luck in this contest Kash.. I used Lento Poetry as one of my forms for Constance's contest.. hope it turned out well.. these words begin my day so well luv.. happy weekend...

Elizabeth Wesley July 28, 2011 at 9:41 PM Ah yes, to dance in the rain, to nice for words but you did a great job. Sounds a winner to me.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 28, 2011 at 8:56 PM Wonderful entry to the contest with the lento, kashinath

Rachelle S. July 28, 2011 at 8:53 PM beautiful writing...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 28, 2011 at 3:56 PM such a pretty poem Kash and such pretty thoughts and images radiate this piece.. good luck in Rick's contest.. u aced the form luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 28, 2011 at 3:27 PM Wonderful creative writing today Kashinath. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud July 28, 2011 at 2:28 PM need your insights on " from a sacred vase, will ya kashi?..:) huggs, nette Nette Onclaud July 28, 2011 at 2:32 PM i meant "low country", yipers! :)

Carolyn Devonshire July 28, 2011 at 1:47 PM The thought of dancing in the rain sounds very erotic in your lovely Lento, Kash. We'll be having rain this afternoon; will you dance with me? Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick July 28, 2011 at 7:04 AM Good luck in the contest with this one..Reads like a winner to me..Very romantic..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Nette Onclaud July 28, 2011 at 4:07 AM filled with sentimental thoight, kashi... a beauty that's a winner for me.. whooo!.:) huggs, nette