Perfect Portrait

The kaleidoscopic view of the myriad of life
Watched through the spectacle of acceptance
Brings me close to the portrait of life
That I want to be more like

I envy the admiration that it gets
The colors of joy splashed across it
I lust for the compliments showered on it
The perfect portrait of life it seems.

I copy my portrait form the one I behold
Add the glitzy hues required
Erase the insignificant details
And finally come up with one of my own
The new portrait is a sight to behold
A portrait as never before; they say
Only that there’s nothing perfect in the portrait
It’s not me anymore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 29, 2008 at 12:45 PM
this piece of wonderful poetry you wrote was new and refreshing and enjoyed reading it.
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