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I've just spied my first snowflake of the year; dancing on a breeze, it swirled in the air. Autumn's practically over, I fear; and Winter's frosty reign is not as fair. Dancing on a breeze, it swirled in the air; performing perfect pirouettes and twirls. With its fragile beauty beyond compare; I watch this snowflake as it spins and whirls. Performing perfect pirouettes and twirls; Winter's ballet dominates centerstage. I watch this snowflake as it spins and whirls, sensing others are waiting just offstage. Winter's ballet dominates centerstage; Autumn's practically over, I fear. Sensing others are waiting just offstage; I've just spied my first snowflake of the year.

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Date: 3/1/2021 1:13:00 PM
Very beautiful Pantoum my dear friend, Emile! I love winter poetry! Congratulations on your win my friend! Ken
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/1/2021 3:40:00 PM
Thanks Ken, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/1/2021 1:38:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 3/1/2021 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2021 12:20:00 PM
Great Rhyming Pantoum , Emile, i particularly love the third stanza .Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/1/2021 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2020 7:59:00 PM
Where snowflakes might be magical you twist the emotion in a pirouette ballet. Love it!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/26/2020 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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