Perfect Ocean

An explosion 
Of sensation 
Sinking in 
Swimming through my skin 
Up my spine 
Around my mind 
Take me in 
I am yours
Open doors 
Pristine shores 
Makes me soar 
Lost years
fighting wars 
Found my fears 
Cried my tears 
no longer whole
Lost control
Ate my soul
Wasting dryness
Too much slyness
your my highness
Overflowing
with your glowing motion
drowning in 
your perfect ocean 

didicated to p.d. my queen of everything
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/26/2015 5:38:00 PM
where you've been all my life?
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:31:00 AM
lol ' k.
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:03:00 PM
the queen of your everything,, good lets full up that air balloon and take a ride together.. always,,xooxox,p.d.
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:19:00 AM
wow... that's ir really great and i love it
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Date: 9/24/2010 2:37:00 PM
a nice dedication to p.d:)
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:07:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!! love this one,..p.d
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Date: 8/19/2010 1:48:00 AM
It is like magic all over again,, and I love this poem,, Reminds me of the perfect words to say on the most perfect date.. With the man you are in love with,, loved it ,, yours always ,..p.d. xoxooxoxoxooxo...:-)
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