Seren Roberts Poet Acrostic

Perfect Love - Contest

perfection in all things
easy, you would think, but not when
re-daunting love is demanded,
forever constant drip of words
eating away my soul, feeling
claustrophobic, being smothered, by
total love which is demanded back

loyalty closes its eyes as
overbearing mother decides my future
vitriol thoughts circle my brain
erased my natural love for my mother


penned 1/2/2016

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Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 4:18 PM Seren, Congrats on "Your Dark Side of Love WIN!!!" XOX ~LINDA~ Seren Roberts February 17, 2016 at 4:56 AM thank you Linda...Seren

Nette Onclaud February 5, 2016 at 1:57 PM let no one steal your happiness... congrats on your fine win, seren.. huggs Seren Roberts February 5, 2016 at 10:23 PM Thanks Nette find it hard to write dark poems... Seren

Balveen Cheema February 5, 2016 at 9:20 AM Brief and powerful Seren!Congrats on your placement! Seren Roberts February 5, 2016 at 10:23 PM Thank you.... Seren

Jan Allison February 4, 2016 at 11:58 AM many congrats on your win with this deep acrostic Seren:-) hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts February 5, 2016 at 10:25 PM When no one commented I thought oh oh I am in trouble with this one.!lol..thanks for your congrats... Seren

Susan Gentry February 4, 2016 at 10:54 AM Congratulations on your win! A different and sad situation expressed well. Seren Roberts February 5, 2016 at 10:26 PM Thank you Susan...Seren