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You borrow to pay your Son's Education in hopes he will get through, that tough Dissertation... you find yourself up to your neck in debt a Collector has taken your rent... it is difficult to remember that original objective, was to get to your son's Big Event... Wow!, to be quite honest, you explain! I would truly over-extend again... at my drop of a hat, never to complain... Son you must look forward to where you're going... at this same time, you must also look aft... for where you did come from, as to see all this, my money... was truly well spent wisely ~ for YOU not a DATE ~ you wanted at your Prom! 'SMILE'

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Date: 9/11/2023 12:01:00 PM
As parents we always look to give to our kids for their education. We want them to succeed and get good jobs to make life easier. love phyl
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Perry Campanella
Date: 9/14/2023 6:49:00 PM
Thank you Phyllis for your review & thoughts - stay safe too!
Date: 9/2/2023 2:57:00 PM
Great rhymes and flow.. great advice!
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Perry Campanella
Date: 9/14/2023 6:51:00 PM
Very kind review ooh Silent One & Thank You for your time to review my poem - stay safe too!
Date: 8/31/2023 12:59:00 PM
- We are always hopeful for our children ... and want to give them the best ... - Great written, I think a lot of people know this "story" ..."SMILE" - :)
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Perry Campanella
Date: 9/14/2023 6:53:00 PM
Thank you for your review Anne-Lise -stay safe too!

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