Raul Moreno Poet Quatrain

Perfect Imperfection

I’m perfectly imperfect, 
And to busy for the tears.
Losing my best friend,
Has had me twisted up for years.
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I’m perfectly imperfect,
On my life’s winding road.
Finding the grace of God,
Helped me to lighten the load.
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I’m perfectly imperfect,
The way God made me to be.
Through Him, I’ve untwisted myself,
And massage my soul with poetry.
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I’m perfectly imperfect,
Set free by my Divine connection.
Through Him, I help you,
With my perfect imperfection.



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Written for Michael Jordan's 
'Lets Get Untwisted' Contest

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Lena Townsend May 26, 2009 at 8:21 PM Wow, I like this one as I can relate. It is hard to get by in this often all too cruel world without faith isn't it? Nice write my friend. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter May 25, 2009 at 6:36 AM Wow. So sorry I missed this first time around. Warmest congrats Raul on your most excellent and well deserved win in Michael's contest! Love, Shar

Brian Strand May 25, 2009 at 1:13 AM Congrats on your success in Michael's contest Raul.Rgds Brian

Dima N. May 4, 2009 at 12:52 AM Thank you for comments because they lead me to your poetry... I've been reading and wondering which one to comment on... Amazing talent... Thank you for sharing your words.. God Bless, Dima

Izzy Gumbo May 2, 2009 at 6:25 AM delightful! I'm perfectly twisted... I wonder if I missed that contest of Michael's??! ;) 'God' is one of the sexiest, funniest, most delightfully obnoxious characters I've met over the past two years. Dang straight perfectly imperfect and we are indeed, created in the image of! lol! "for the love of god...." !Yes! always! Great poem my friend. :)

Alley Poe April 30, 2009 at 11:13 AM Great write! Always good to except yourself for the way you are.

Jay Loveless April 30, 2009 at 11:08 AM I LOOVVEE this lol...great job ^^

Anthony Nutter April 29, 2009 at 2:56 AM A wonderful write. I’m perfectly imperfect, On my life’s winding road. Finding the grace of God, Helped me to lighten the load. loved this stanza, sums up my life always lightens my load

Debbie Guzzi April 28, 2009 at 1:15 PM perfection doesn't exsist! If it did you'd be on the list! Light & Love

Tyler Martin April 27, 2009 at 9:54 PM Nice word play with the title, I think with God we can conquer all. Tyler

Julie Loveless April 27, 2009 at 8:09 PM This is an amazing write.

Christopher Higgins April 27, 2009 at 12:52 PM I love the repitition of each stanza..this flows very well and the poem reveals itself nicely..well done...best wishes in the contest...i left you soup mail.

Darleen Bilyeu April 27, 2009 at 11:24 AM lovely!!! i would say it couldnt get better but i know you always find a way to out do your other poems!!!

Laurie Ginn April 27, 2009 at 4:07 AM This is going to favorites my friend its perfection in imperfection, graceful and understated.

Carolyn Devonshire April 26, 2009 at 11:21 PM Feeling God's presence helps many people "untwist" their lives, Raul. "Perfect imperfection" is a great oxymoron. None of us can ever hope to be perfect, but with God's love we learn to live with our imperfections. Great poem, Raul! Love, Carolyn