Perfect Illusion Cys

My mind-- a blank
lost in haze,
to see him beg
wake my sleep--

When I’m the one
drunk on love—
Is this a trick,
A flawed craze?


Four Lines Of Melodic Poetry
Nette Onclaud Contest
2 September 2019:  Perfect Illusion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Congrats on your placement In the contest!;)
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September 3, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Wonderfully written and presented. This was beautifully dream-like. Best wishes in the contest
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