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Perfect Gift

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Below is the poem entitled Perfect Gift which was written by poet Felicia Jarvis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Perfect Gift

Perfect Gift

I couldn’t sleep at night so I went out
Stars’ glowings make my heart rejoice
Without disturbance from any artificial light
The moonlight tenderly shines, I found solace

Sitting down on a chair, I found a little peace
The sound of waves like a chorus of stars
Repeated for millions of years never to cease
How amazing! No sounds are the same in my ears

The night is lit by the moon and stars
It’s perfect for me to enjoy sitting alone
Thinking about your wisdom and power
It’s sad you are not recognised by everyone

Your impartiality and generosity are obvious through the star filled night
I feel ashamed, how much blood has been shed under this perfect gift

1st May 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 5/2/2017 4:52:00 PM
A gift of a sonnet...beautifully done Felicia...^WW^
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 5/9/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, Winged Warrior.