Perfect Diamond

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unrhymed tercets

On the night of a cold moon's glare golden ring around frozen particles kiss your beam over and back carries one torch Desires delight dances in kaleidoscopic diamonds warm once more my heart with treasured warmth in dreams of jewelled passion we drink from star's cup Faraway wonder of this universe circle of never ending hope dancing life's shadow starry eyed reflections over sea's touch Oh truth of truth your radiance comes once again within an eclipse of desire we dance in Heaven dreaming within your peaceful stars of glory that shine A Collaboration By, Liam Macdaibheid. & Michael P Clarke.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/21/2018 2:45:00 PM

I do like the way you described the diamond. Have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2018 4:32:00 PM

what wonderful imagery in a gem of a poem. a stunning poem Mike and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/9/2018 4:25:00 PM

Liam and Mike, Another great collaboration by the both of you on a very moving and passion-filled Tercet!! Well-Done!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/5/2018 1:19:00 PM

Hi Liam, thank you for letting us share ink once more in a new collaborastion. It is indeed an honour and a pleasure. Your pen does run gold as always Liam. Our journey does continue. I found the enjoyment of our collaborating once again. Excellent work my friend. This has to be a fave. Your friend always....Mike.

Donna Loughman

Date: 1/4/2018 9:55:00 PM

Michael & Liam, Your pens danced with warm radiance in this excellent write! Well done...a new favorite:-)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/4/2018 8:55:00 PM

Beautiful penning!