Notes About The Poem

unrhymed tercets 

Perfect Diamond

On the night of a cold moon's glare
golden ring around frozen particles kiss
your beam over and back carries one torch

Desires delight dances in kaleidoscopic diamonds
warm once more my heart with treasured warmth
in dreams of jewelled passion we drink from star's cup

Faraway wonder of this universe
circle of never ending hope dancing life's shadow
starry eyed reflections over sea's touch

Oh truth of truth your radiance comes once again
within an eclipse of desire we dance in Heaven
dreaming within your peaceful stars of glory that shine


A Collaboration
By,
Liam Macdaibheid.
&
Michael P Clarke.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 2:45 PM
I do like the way you described the diamond. Have a nice day my friend.
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 4:32 PM
what wonderful imagery in a gem of a poem. a stunning poem Mike and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx
Bateman Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Liam and Mike, Another great collaboration by the both of you on a very moving and passion-filled Tercet!! Well-Done!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Raven Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Hi Liam, thank you for letting us share ink once more in a new collaborastion. It is indeed an honour and a pleasure. Your pen does run gold as always Liam. Our journey does continue. I found the enjoyment of our collaborating once again. Excellent work my friend. This has to be a fave. Your friend always....Mike.
Loughman Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Michael & Liam, Your pens danced with warm radiance in this excellent write! Well done...a new favorite:-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Beautiful penning!
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