... Gigno Poet Rhyme

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(An idea from the contest: "One Of Your Greatest Days")

Perfect Day

I've never had a perfect day
but I've always known it's on the horizon
There's forever a part of me
blind that there's hope in the sun rising
I'll never stare too closely
as I'll not see what each day is devising 
I've got to just wait for it
what I've not expected is most surprising
A tell tale sign I'm obvious
that I'm not seeing the day is disguising
If it's up to fate to decide
my perfect day includes it's own uprising

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Gail Debole May 2, 2013 at 7:47 PM I don't think I have ever had a perfect day either. Has anyone? I wonder what that would look like. Would I realize that I had had a perfect day or close to perfect immediately after the fact? Liked reading about your perspective. Thanks for your !!! about my poem. - Gail

Poet Destroyer A April 13, 2013 at 12:20 PM stopping to read this poem again !!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!! ... JK.... love the poem once again... !!!!!!!!!!!! PD

Timothy Hicks March 17, 2013 at 11:34 PM If you knew exactly what would happen where would be the joy or thrill in your life? One should find the beauty in imperfection... because each day is another possibly of it all completely changing. Profound write Gigno!

Delysia Hendricks March 13, 2013 at 11:23 AM "!!!"

Elizabeth Wesley March 6, 2013 at 9:07 PM !

Jack Horne March 6, 2013 at 9:40 AM thoughtful write here : )

Debra Squyres March 6, 2013 at 9:39 AM Hope, ever riding on the breeze of a new day. Much enjoyed this !!

Donna Jones March 2, 2013 at 7:15 PM Perfection is an illusion so great hunting.....beautiful poem though,....just beautiful......

Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2013 at 10:17 AM ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! <------ hope you love my humor...that means I super love the perfect feeling of your poem... !!! LINDA

Charmaine Chircop March 2, 2013 at 5:36 AM lovely..Have an uprising day:)