Perfect Day

puffed marshmallow clouds float in cerulean sky songbirds taking flight
written March 7, 2022 [syllables checked with HMS]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 2:44 PM
This is the kind of day we hope for every day!
Hankins Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Ah, wouldn't it be nice? And it will be until November here in Kentucky. Hoping the same for you in Kansas!
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 8:08 PM
Sounds sublime to me. Let's all enjoy your haiku and the rare days like this one.
Hankins Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Thanks, gw. I was waxing poetic. Actually, I was trying to hit just the right note for a contest.
Baker Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 12:45 PM
I like the term marshmallow clouds, Nice first line for your Haiku.
Hankins Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 1:22 PM
Well, I hope Lasaad likes it!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 12:30 PM
A perfect day! I feel as though I’m in the mountains…a perfect Spring day in Georgia!
Hankins Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 1:23 PM
It's kind of damp and dreary here, but I understand it was to be a marvelous weekend on the beaches.
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