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Perfect Day

puffed marshmallow clouds float in cerulean sky songbirds taking flight written March 7, 2022 [syllables checked with HMS]

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/13/2022 2:44:00 PM

This is the kind of day we hope for every day!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/13/2022 4:24:00 PM

Ah, wouldn't it be nice? And it will be until November here in Kentucky. Hoping the same for you in Kansas!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2022 8:08:00 PM

Sounds sublime to me. Let's all enjoy your haiku and the rare days like this one.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/8/2022 8:37:00 AM

Thanks, gw. I was waxing poetic. Actually, I was trying to hit just the right note for a contest.

Bill Baker

Date: 5/7/2022 12:45:00 PM

I like the term marshmallow clouds, Nice first line for your Haiku.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/7/2022 1:22:00 PM

Well, I hope Lasaad likes it!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/7/2022 12:30:00 PM

A perfect day! I feel as though I’m in the mountains…a perfect Spring day in Georgia!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/7/2022 1:23:00 PM

It's kind of damp and dreary here, but I understand it was to be a marvelous weekend on the beaches.