- Perfect Balance -

The power I yearn to catch

A surplus beauty overflowing hearts
Dew settles, sprinkled gently a wet blanket

Star leather leads me into unknown territory
My senses are imprisoned and takes my breath
Through a crack in the window I can see this magnificent

In a moment, soft breeze of the evening an amazing view
Hypnotised by the nature and it's miraculous glow
The image of happiness, on the menu this evening 

Cobwebs of dream seekers hidden magic 
In four chambers one corner dusty twilight appears
Under silk covers rising and falling oceans mist over
 
Back breathing from the salted well drawing a bridge of sighs
Under a cradle of moonshine drunken beams starlight  
Rivers of jewels running down the mountain
 
Inside droplets our soul is set free 
Dew drowning under the fountains

Of eternal beauty enveloped 











A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
27.01.2017
(01 - 17)
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Bateman Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Liam and Anne-Lise, A perfect write for a perfect occasion--much power and emotion!! Superb collaboration!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Bennett Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 9:56 AM
I love--happiness being on the menu--xo
Downing  Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 6:38 AM
Fantastic piece of collaboration Liam and Anne-Lise. I love it :)
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 5:37 AM
- Dear Liam .....hugs and best wishes for a lovely day :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 5:20 AM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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