Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Perfect Balance -

The power I yearn to catch

A surplus beauty overflowing hearts
Dew settles, sprinkled gently a wet blanket

Star leather leads me into unknown territory
My senses are imprisoned and takes my breath
Through a crack in the window I can see this magnificent

In a moment, soft breeze of the evening an amazing view
Hypnotised by the nature and it's miraculous glow
The image of happiness, on the menu this evening 

Cobwebs of dream seekers hidden magic 
In four chambers one corner dusty twilight appears
Under silk covers rising and falling oceans mist over
 
Back breathing from the salted well drawing a bridge of sighs
Under a cradle of moonshine drunken beams starlight  
Rivers of jewels running down the mountain
 
Inside droplets our soul is set free 
Dew drowning under the fountains

Of eternal beauty enveloped 











A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
27.01.2017
(01 - 17)
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Lynn Marie February 18, 2017 at 6:10 PM Breathtakingly beautiful. The title drew me in and your tranquil words kept me here for several reads. The imagery is stunning and I feel as if I have experienced a spiritual renewal. A superb collaboration and a wonderful example of the power of words to feel all emotions. blessings, lynn Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2017 at 7:19 AM - Lynn, thank you for your lovely comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu February 12, 2017 at 11:08 AM I also like the colour yellow, my bedroom is yellow. Perfect Blance makes me feel Like I am in that spot. Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2017 at 11:15 AM - My bedroom is yellow too :) - Thank you for your lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock February 1, 2017 at 1:09 PM That is one awesome picture it looks like a time portal into the unknown. Love the poem Anne Lise and Liam love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2017 at 1:28 PM - I love the picture :) - Phyllis, thank you for your lovely comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel January 31, 2017 at 8:42 AM This is really fabulous, both of you:) and what a stunning picture! I'm saving it, Anne-lise:) a 7:) Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2017 at 7:40 AM - Thank you for your lovely comments a 7, saving and visit, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison January 29, 2017 at 12:53 PM The image is fabulous, your imagery is breathtaking - a fabulous collaboration Anne Lise you and Liam write so well together:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2017 at 12:58 PM - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Jan :) - Thank you for your lovely comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phillip Garcia January 28, 2017 at 7:28 PM What a fascinating poem, it's eloquent and lovely while rich in depth and meaning. I've read it a few times and keep coming away with something new and different each time. Great collaborative effort, to be sure. Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2017 at 6:05 AM - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Phillip :) - Thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 28, 2017 at 8:14 AM A beautiful collaboration...love the "bridge of sighs"...best wishes..Have a great weekend Sunshine Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 8:21 AM - Thank you for your lovely comments and visit, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman January 28, 2017 at 4:35 AM Beautiful collab, Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 7:17 AM - The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Harry :) - Thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 28, 2017 at 1:43 AM Another mesmerising collaboration! A seven to each of you: Dearest Anne- Lise and Liam! Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 7:17 AM - The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it :) - Thank you for your lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 27, 2017 at 10:07 PM Excellent both of you Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 7:16 AM - The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Eve :) - Thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith January 27, 2017 at 8:12 PM Lovely you two, thank you... Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 7:13 AM - The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it :) - Thank you for your lovely comments , Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter January 27, 2017 at 5:21 PM Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 7:13 AM - The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Dorian :) - Thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid January 27, 2017 at 4:53 PM your pen shone golden thought this dear friend a pleasure mixing ink with you anne lise i pray you have a blessed beautiful weekend pal Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 7:03 AM - Always a pleasure, my friend Liam :)

Arthur Vaso January 27, 2017 at 3:38 PM Now you two have simply re-painted that amazing image, what a beautiful, serene poem! Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 7:12 AM - The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Arthur :) - Thank you for your lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green January 27, 2017 at 2:09 PM Wow, what a beautiful collaboration. This was fantastic, both poets really shine in this wonderful piece of writing. Bravo to both of you. Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2017 at 7:11 AM - The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it :) - Thank you for your lovely comments , Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)