Perfect

Breathe i on you

You breathe on i

 

We, on parallel lines

Our gaze on these thighs

 

Behind you see i orange lining

Before i see you silver, sparkling

 

Outstretched arms reaches for mine

Mine stretches forth gracefully before count nine

 

Perfect you

Perfect i

Bound by this love we share

You and I

 

Two steps forward, two more forward

Eyes locked, keys thrown backward

 

Sweet melody envelopes two pairs of ears

Yes, enraptured in memorable years

 

My symphony, yours to cherish

Your symphony, mine to relish

 

Our smiles run across borders

A crime? Hmm, who longer bothers?

 

Perfect i

perfect you

Bound by these words we share

I and You

 

My feet expresses this dance

Your feet enjoying my melodic prance

 

Away to a fountain of fanciful joy

Oh how breathtaking, this i do employ

 

Your words drip on me, softly, soft

I rest on assurance, standing on this loft

 

My eyes your perfect looking glass

Your eyes make me smile, this has come to pass

 

Perfect you

Perfect i

Bound by this music we sing

You and I

 

Oh, now it doesn't matter

Though their words scatter

 

Our visions bound by one

Gossips are handing us none

 

Reach i for your lips

You reach for my kiss

 

Our embrace interlocked in a golden sphere

A glittering circle, i see so clear

 

Perfect... you

Perfect... i

Bound by these vows

You and I

 

 

THOUGHTS OF A POETESS

"NEOFLOETRY"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/13/2016 8:45:00 PM
well expressed... Such a beautiful way to start a love...SKAT
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Date: 1/10/2014 6:40:00 AM
Nicely penned
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Date: 1/10/2014 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Syam.
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