Perfect

Crickets chirping in a still night
cool breeze on a summers day
not a sarcastic word not a fight
spending a day in a loving way

Watching the birds play
singing their song
kill the memory of a workday
no need to be strong

A long night of good talks
secrets shared without worries
ending in midnight walks
all while telling stories

No worries 
No pressures to detect
no sorry
that would be perfect
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 10, 2011 at 6:11 PM
A perfect rendition of perfection, Rob. I'm with you on this one. Well done.
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