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Life’s not always a bed of roses but perennials help ;)

PERENNIAL FLOWERS JUST FOR ME far below the canopy, the speckled hawk soars — whoa! he’s hardly in my space but so close.
my toes jam up in my gray Bob’s as I descend the cracking driveway, and my eyes ascend toward the clouds, hard to see through the oaks. my eyes roller-coast back to the pavement or I jeopardize my life, firsthand knowledge gained when shoes roll over pebbles and stick debris quite humbly spurring me to a knee. i reach my destination. i look at my well dressed yard, the ground worked hard. the red mulch compliments our home and the reticent retaining wall keeps are summertime willow felicitous. — what i came out to see, the perennial flowers just for me, a husband’s love. the purple coneflowers and delicate daisies a simple offering, a favor asked before his job took him overseas and i visited the grands. here his little bit of leaven forms a lump in my grateful heart. my thighs pump as i climb our renowned hill, ready to give praise, and enjoying the clumps of hay protecting hibiscus buds, when the buzz of an invisible bee chases me
the rest of the way. not a fan, i shun the stranger, slam the door, readily make a beeline to my honey. “I love the flowers. Nice job!” The bee he says, gave me a bit of exercise. Now why’d he have to go and say that. Men and children have a habit of speaking from the heart, not always what you want to hear, but the sweet flowers in my eyes dance for a while and i love that man. 8/3/2019

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Date: 8/5/2019 1:36:00 PM
... always from the heart, Kim ... of course you love him :) - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2019 3:36:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! My mouth opens a time or two too! :)
Date: 8/5/2019 9:23:00 AM
I love to watch nature in movement, Kim, missing a husband overseas gets pretty lonely. Bees are beautiful in their place .. Great imagery and feeling s .
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Date: 8/5/2019 3:37:00 PM
Thanks, dear Eve! :)
Date: 8/4/2019 6:19:00 PM
" my eyes roller-coast back to the pavement" - this line sprinkled a bit of delight into my day, Kim. It sounds like those cone flowers are doing well! So glad! And with love too. You had a hawk. He had a bee. I can so relate to this one!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2019 9:36:00 PM
I figured you’d enjoy the nature of it all :)
Date: 8/4/2019 3:27:00 AM
Inspiring, captivating and imaginative poem of quality dearest, Kim. Much enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2019 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios! :)
Date: 8/3/2019 3:20:00 PM
A lovely poem, Kim! Your vivid imagery allowed me to picture this clearly. (If I had been there, I would have run from the bee, too.) Love, Kim M.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2019 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Kim <3 Kim
Date: 8/3/2019 12:56:00 PM
This poem is so filled with beauty, I am really breathless! But..so grateful for your writing Kim! Thank you This is a POTD plus! Love, Panagiota. XoXo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thank you for saying that. You’ve touched my heart. Blowing friendship kisses xxoo

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