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peregrine

peregrine nosedive
swooping in whirlwind spiral
~ lark's last aria



AP: 2nd place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hassall Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Lovely Haiku!
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Thanks, Kathleen ~ much appreciated
Baker Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 9:58 PM
Nice Haiku, Line. With this poem, you are now a member of the Dead Birds of Poetry Society! Have a nice weekend, my friend. Bill
Gauthier Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 10:49 AM
lol ~ such an honour
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 4:37 PM
graceful and captivating Haiku Nicely done, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Thanks, Sara ~ much appreciated
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Very expressive! whirlwind?
Gauthier Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim. The descent is rapid like a shot, pretty dramatic and... fatal ~
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