peregrine

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peregrine nosedive
swooping in whilwind spiral
~ lark's last aria

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Kathleen Hassall

Date: 8/17/2025 4:27:00 PM

Lovely Haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2025 9:36:00 PM

Thanks, Kathleen ~ much appreciated

Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 9:58:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Line. With this poem, you are now a member of the Dead Birds of Poetry Society! Have a nice weekend, my friend. Bill

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2025 10:49:00 AM

lol ~ such an honour

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 4:37:00 PM

graceful and captivating Haiku Nicely done, Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2025 7:03:00 PM

Thanks, Sara ~ much appreciated

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2025 6:18:00 AM

Very expressive! whirlwind?

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2025 1:59:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim. The descent is rapid like a shot, pretty dramatic and... fatal ~