Perched Glacier Debris

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November 20, 2023

Contest : Metaphorical Realism In Suzette Prime

Sponsored by : Suzette Richards

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in winter of congealed land
the poignant stream froze
in the desolate valley of chilled flowers
unseen in the hills of blues

the spring of revived longing
melted glacier of innate hearty content 
in lacustrine luster of sapphire embrace
where the blocks of essence ice 
perched on actuality stones of yearned shore
formed the obelisk icon
the eternal connection 
between the heavenly sky 
and endless life force

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2023 6:34:00 AM

Way to go with this creative winner in Suzette's contest. Congratulations to you. Sara K

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, Sara.

Suzette Richards

Date: 12/6/2023 3:45:00 AM

Congratulations with your placement, Sublimal. If you would like to have a copy of the tables as mentioned on the contest page, please soup mail me. Regards, Suzette

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:18:00 PM

Thank you for the placement and for the tables.