November 20, 2023
Contest : Metaphorical Realism In Suzette Prime
Sponsored by : Suzette Richards
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in winter of congealed land the poignant stream froze in the desolate valley of chilled flowers unseen in the hills of blues the spring of revived longing melted glacier of innate hearty content in lacustrine luster of sapphire embrace where the blocks of essence ice perched on actuality stones of yearned shore formed the obelisk icon the eternal connection between the heavenly sky and endless life force
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