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Perceptibly Slow

Dredging up scuttled dreams you'd once let go; stirs up muddy waters laced with regret. And at times, time seems perceptibly slow, pausing on the things you want to forget. Memories, lacking both substance and weight, can't control the emotions they release. And when deceit sets the course of your fate, tears of loneliness will only increase. Fate pays little attention to your cries as anxieties increase, that is plain. And so, you look for ways to compromise while crying eyes spill the tears they contain. You dismiss defeat with an angry heart, for love's a miracle gleaned from the soul. And though trust's foundation was torn apart, hope gathers the pieces and makes them whole. Initiating change is always hard, and you hesitate to seek love again. Yet forsaking your dreams without regard; will inevitably bring you more pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/1/2015 2:14:00 PM
Great title. I was surprised to find the rest didn't falter. Very perceptive. Thanks.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2015 2:27:00 PM
Thanks, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/31/2015 8:39:00 AM
Within the glimmer of hope heartache becomes bearable. This is a fine piece of writing.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Date: 3/30/2015 6:49:00 PM
oops had to give the 7...
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:48:00 PM
I rate this poem as exceptional for clarity of message, smoothness of flow and great rhythm and rhyme. A7 and tremendous write my friend... Sage advice and often so hard to follow as lost love is a wound that sometimes refuses to heal.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2015 8:10:00 AM
Thanks again Robert, your visits are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 3/30/2015 2:52:00 PM
- Heartbreaking and deeply moving poem, but give nevertheless hope and faith for tomorrow - I enjoy reading your poems, Emile - A 7 ..... love will win ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/30/2015 5:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne Lise, I appreciate your kind words. Emile.

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