Andrea Dietrich Poet Concrete

Pepperoni Pizza

Make 
                                     mine spicy
                                  Mama Mia. How
                                I love a spicy pizza.
                           Make it cheesy, so that it'll
                      please me. Oh and, in the middle
                    put a large                    pepperoni
                 so big and                          round that
                I'll get fat                              even when 
              I look at that.                        No, that's not
            a doughnut hole                     that you see now
          in the middle. That's the piece of pepperoni! How I  
        wish that I could color in the center spicy red. You will
    have to use instead what you've got inside inside your head:
 Your imagination, right? Then imagine one more thing. Can you
guess? Sink your teeth into this pizza Yummy yum, now take a bite!

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James Inman July 28, 2019 at 11:10 AM A tasty little treat Andrea.

Line Gauthier September 21, 2018 at 2:38 PM LOL - a delicious gem of a poem, Andrea. Congrats on your win.

Augustus Black September 21, 2018 at 7:20 AM Ha! Ha! Great art there I see! Juicy, spicy cheesy... wow! Congratulation for the win... Andrea...

Jan Allison September 21, 2018 at 3:33 AM many congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet September 20, 2018 at 5:27 PM What a cute/clever poem, Andrea. I love pizza and pepperoni but unfortunately I can't eat it. Nevertheless, your poem made me hungry for some pizza now! Congrats on your placement in the contest. I got an N/A even though Maureen said she really liked mine. Oh well... Just another N/A. What can I say? Tomorrow is another day...........

Eve Roper September 20, 2018 at 3:34 PM Wow! Wonderful, Andrea, mmm... pizza.. congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 20, 2018 at 9:52 AM Andrea, this one melts with awesomeness. The shape oozes, soft like it's in your hand. Well done dear poetess! Thank you and congratulations! xomo <3

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 20, 2018 at 4:38 AM Congratulations, Andrea on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong September 19, 2018 at 10:37 PM Congratulations on your clever pizza poem winning Andrea. Wish I had a piece right now! : )

Gershon Wolf September 3, 2018 at 1:53 PM Save the hole for me, Andrea!! :) gw

Ralph Sergi September 1, 2018 at 6:34 PM Andrea; a unique poetic representation!

Janice Canerdy August 31, 2018 at 9:42 PM Very clever and creative, Andrea! Janice

CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 4:49 AM Andrea: for some reason, I cannot delete this redundant box - will you please remove it from your end? Many thanks. Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2018 at 7:05 PM I can't see what you are talking about , Caycay!!

CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 4:48 AM OK, I'm hungry, if I can't have pizza, maybe at least one pepperoni? You clever poet, you - this is delicious, I mean creative and cheesy, no, not cheesy - entertaining! These shape/concrete forms don't inspire me or my muse much so I'm waiting for inspiration. I need a snack - cheesy Doritos, maybe? Poetry hugs ... CayCay Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2018 at 7:06 PM I love cheesy doritos but have to avoid that kind of thing nowadays! I had my eyes checked today and the doctor said my eyesight has improved. I owe it to all the carrots and veggies!!!

Pashang Salehi August 31, 2018 at 1:59 AM Delicious...

John Gondolf August 30, 2018 at 5:04 PM Wow, Andrea, this was really fun to read, now I'm going to have to go get something to eat...haha. Nicely written my friend. John

M. L. Kiser August 30, 2018 at 1:43 PM Well, now I'm hungry for pizza. Beautifully depicted pizza in this poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu August 30, 2018 at 1:14 PM Hello Andrea, this is my favorite pizza next to the Philly Steak Cheese pizza. Now I am hungry for pizza. That must have been hard work to do this shape. I had toe surgery done, that is why I have not been on the computer for awhile. Have a nice day my friend.

Joanna Daniel August 30, 2018 at 3:17 AM This is simply great and yummy, Andrea:)

Matthew Anish August 29, 2018 at 8:21 PM One can gain weight merely looking at this poem. Very clever! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Winged Warrior August 29, 2018 at 10:08 AM Now you're talking my language...except I like bacon...but hey pizza is pizza...great concrete Andrea...love & light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit August 29, 2018 at 7:04 AM A delicious poem..you designed it well Andrea!

Caren Krutsinger August 29, 2018 at 3:36 AM I was curious as to the hole in the middle, now I see it is the pepperoni! What a tasty, smart smelling, yummy poem, Andrea.

Jan Allison August 29, 2018 at 2:40 AM mmm a tasty poem Andrea!:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina August 28, 2018 at 10:17 PM I love pepperoni pizza, and I absolutely love your poem, Andrea. All I ask is that you save me a slice, I'll bring the soda...lol It's the only time I drink it, gotta have soda with pizza. But a fine wine will work too :) Love it!

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