People-Watching

When I people-watch, I wonder
Who they are and where they live
Through the hints that they unconsciously,
Or with their knowledge, give.

Have they moved here after college
Or come searching for a job?
In their rentals or their sublets,
Who’s a neatnik? Who’s a slob?

Are they happy in the city?
Do they miss where they were raised?
Do the crowds and noises freak them out
Or are they quite unfazed?

Where they headed on this Sunday?
Is there someplace they must be?
Or perhaps they’re out to just relax
And people-watch, like me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 10:35 AM
"Who’s a neatnik? Who’s a slob?" - I love this part; thinking beatnik, neatnik.
Borke Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 7:25 AM
I’m watching you through your poems. Thanks for not leaving me wondering.
Wolf Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 7:49 PM
People. People who watch people. Are the luckiest people in the world. ~ B.S.
Amadore Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 2:03 PM
A truly enjoyable and definitely educational pursuit that everyone should take advantage of because it is so affordable and close at hand. For safety's sake, just be discreet and a little cautious so as not to offend. lol
Peck Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Ilene, It's true-- so much fun to people watch! I miss long-ago days when my friend and I would each buy a coke and a bag of chips, sit in car and people watch.
M  Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 6:40 PM
Aww ilene l love this poem….l too love to people watch and have written a poem on it! We think similar…..l love the way you write ilene….Debx
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