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People People People

Those with time to the brink are on the irk. Sincere toadies do not cast magic shirk. People who have also been hugely hurt. People tranced with the act of a flirt. Firmly, it isn't the genial people who I denied. They're apt as crucial as the things they hide. This dreadful wrath has taken over my heart.  If I grasp them, chew the cud; my hair grows a dart. You appreciate them, yet they overlook you. It's tuff to fathom folks who love but fade too. People who beget anguish and sadness. People who say they care but flee in darkness. I deplore slugging, furious, proud, and slander people. People fear honesty; therefore, I sprawl the treacle.
Written: January 08, 2022 King-Size Bull Crap Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina
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George Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 8:30 PM
Hi Lasaad...Back to your poem with hearty Congratulations on your great win!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. As a child, I did not understood the kids. Then they grew we into adults/people. Now for people, I have never understood them and guess I never will. A pretty picture. Have a blessed day........................
Alex Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 9:22 PM
Whole poem is very beautiful, especially the last line. Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 4:32 PM
This is really very well-written, Lasaad. The old saying "You can't judge a book by its cover" never loomed so real when it comes to some people. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
Poet Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 12:46 PM
I appreciate you taking the time to read, place, and comment on my poem; it means a great deal to me, and I'm delighted you think it's worth the placement.
Pandit Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 5:44 AM
People are as they are--we are at peace when we choose to honor self. Great insights, Lasaad. I like your photo--inspiration for us knowing how a lotus emerges through mud.
George Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 9:00 PM
People are hardly as they seem outwardly . Many are full of deceit, arrogance and pride. Many people beget anguish and sadness ! A profound write on human nature, Lasaad ! Best of luck in the contest!
Ahmed Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Deeply thoughtful poetry! Best of luck in the contest, Tayeb. Thanks - Marshall
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