People Have Lost Sense

By evening five we started ,
Our christmas shopping activities. 
My wife on the lead, her purse full.
Me appreciating her choices elegantly;
Kevin, Andrea supporting my task ,
Our activities ended by nine.
tired we, wanted to sit and relax,
“How about a cool drink? “, my wife.
“Yes, Yes, we should “, I replied.
We walked in to a hotel, lights dim.
Seated we happily, bearer so quick ,
“Four royal falooda “, my wife.
“Da a jungle story”, my children
At last, I got a lead role to play, I thought .
“You know nothing to make these kids laugh”, my wife,
She started narrating a jungle story with expressions!
my children started listening, I too!
Royal falooda came. 
I asked bearer not to disturb. 
We got in to our world,
My wife,” Once upon a time a fox and a stork lived in a jungle”.  
I said, “might be near a lake”
“Yes, yes”, my wife.
“They were good friends. But the fox was very selfish”, my wife. 
“Could be like me”, I said.
“Yes,yes”, my wife.
 My wife, “One day he thought of a plan to tease the stork”.  
“Could be like you”, I said.
“Shut up Da”, my daughter.
“The fox invited the stork for lunch”, my wife.
“I know this story”, screamed my son!
“Go ahead, go ahead”, my daughter.
“The stork accepted his invitation happily- 
and reached on time for lunch”, my wife.
“Poor stork”, I said.
“Now the fox played a trick and presented -
food in a very shallow plate”, my wife.
“Poor stork”, I said.
My wife, “The fox finished his food in no time but- 
the stork was not able to have his food at all”.
 “Poor stork”, I said.
my son started laughing noisily!
My daughter too joined him.
I struggled badly to appease them.
 My son said, “Da, I too couldn’t have my falooda at all”.
we were offered a small plastic spoon!
falooda was in a narrow tall cup!
We know not, but we were struggling
I laughed at my wife. She was awe struck!
I said coolly, “I never follow etiquettes",
I threw the spoon and drank the whole falooda!
My children followed me.
My wife threw the spoon; screamed, “Idiot”
She was firing the bearer.
I was laughing silently.
Nowadays people have lost sense!


written on 15-12-2013 for the contest "Any poem #5" by Poet Destroyer A.

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Date: 2/19/2016 10:14:00 PM
nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:22:00 PM
You've been gone for a long time, Poet Undertaker, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/15/2014 2:47:00 PM
Great poem here! I enjoyed reading.. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/3/2014 10:52:00 PM
Hi Poet Undertaker, when are you going to post a new poem for me to read... I will go back and read another old one... hope you are well... always~ LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2013 9:01:00 PM
I hope you enjoyed the Christmas. Congratulations on the win, Jenish
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:46:00 AM
Hello my poet Friend, .. CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox..Linda
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Date: 12/25/2013 1:27:00 AM
Hey merry Christmas!! and yes,I know it is a drink but what KIND of drink??for example, a juice? and if so, of which fruit?
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Date: 12/24/2013 3:50:00 AM
Poet U T.,--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 12/21/2013 8:46:00 AM
Gotta fave this one!!! Best I've seen of you I think.
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:46:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.(: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/21/2013 8:45:00 AM
wow, this is so delightful. To see you interacting with your children. It sounds like a really happy family. What is falooda anyway? An exotic drink??
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:52:00 AM
Andrea, falooda is a popular summer drink throughout Pakistan, India, Bangladesh, Sri Lanka, Myanmar, and the Middle East .Thank you.(: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/20/2013 8:53:00 AM
Very captivating work that you have penned..Tell us another story..Thanks for dropping by..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:47:00 AM
Thank you Sara.(: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/20/2013 7:40:00 AM
- Jenish, thanks for a great story - Luck in contest ! - Thanks for all the nice poem you shared with me, I wish you and everyone you love a pleasant Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:47:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lisa.(: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/17/2013 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, a very enjoyable verse for a snowy day! Was it the Jungle Book Stories? Light & Love
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Date: 12/18/2013 10:24:00 PM
Debbie,I sent a request.I'm eagerly awaiting a reply.
Date: 12/16/2013 8:38:00 AM
Very lovable humor, Jenish
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Date: 12/18/2013 10:26:00 PM
As an English professor your achievements are remarkable.
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Date: 12/18/2013 10:23:00 PM
Thank you for the encouragement you give.
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Date: 12/18/2013 10:22:00 PM
Dr.Mehta I visited your profile.Read your achievements as a English Professor.Great .Than you for the encouragement you give.
Date: 12/15/2013 1:21:00 PM
Delightfully told tale, it shrieks with happiness. very good "GRIN"
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Date: 12/18/2013 10:19:00 PM
Thank you Paddi.I like your "The Rivers".
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