Penumbra

inky black night
stars brightly sparkling
earths giant shadow
moon slowly fading

dark shadow spreading
a total lunar eclipse
a rare winter solstice
not to be missed

finally total coverage
only one light to see
a bright orange penumbra
meant for only me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 17, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Nice descriptive wording and rhyming in this presentation makes it a delight to read.
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January 3, 2011 at 5:17 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Lori. Love, Carol
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