Penultimate Dawn

And would I write of all 
the lesser staples of the trivia 
that pass before my mind 
while history is borne--it is
of man, the swell of glory
in his chest. The ages pass
before him, he to stand, select
the argument, the passion in it--
he to put in place demand, a price,
a crest to rule when time slows
down its pace.

There looking up, I see
the restless skies; they'll not
be conquered by a man,
nor by a god that he creates.
He, the one to see, to be
creature of his science which
sees of its own, creates
a reference to its own.
Its flight is free, and shares
one thing alone--one basic power,
one love.
     ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 7:44 PM
This one content wise I am unsure what you are trying to say. So, the content is ambiguous? [check when to use that and when to use which and when to leave the word out?] use more sensory input. I think you should be using [his] instead of [he]. What do we picture when this is read? What do we hear? Where's the emotion? Light & Love
Ludden Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 10:19 PM
Thank you. You've now given me something to work on!
Delaney Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:27 AM
Yes in the face of it all, man is only as great as the love he creates. Very thought provoking.
Ludden Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Thanks,Suzanne
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